I really enjoyed this, especially the idea of the good narrator and the bad/false narrator. It really speaks to me in that it reminds me of how I can start a project and make some progress on it just to scrap it out of frustration, effectively killing it like Jeff was killed. I do this because this "false" narrator is arguing those same points in my head that I should quit before I start, etc.
Loved it, great job.
Thanks!
Not a bad little premise or execution, but there are so issues. Environment can be a little confusing, with some objects capable of being vaulted, and others not. Music is pretty fitting and I like it despite the repetition. Overall, could use some tweaking but not "bad" by any means.
Hi, I'm Giuseppe. I'm a world-building enthusiast that also does work as a fantasy fiction writer. Drop your jorts or leave the fort.
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Pichetto Dynamite: Escape from Villa 1-11-14